A Longing of Struggle by Saee Shirolkar | Thursday Verse No. 19
We often believe that stillness, when surrounded by comfort, means peace. Yet there are stillnesses that arise not from calm, but from unheard voices and unanswered efforts.
A Longing of Struggle closely listens to the uneasy silences that linger within care.
A Longing of Struggle
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| Illustration by Mercy Rebonica |
Why is it still so glum?
Wondered the captor, carrying the usual treats,
And now even a peach and a plum.
To me till a year
Didn’t you come daily
Fluttering your wings, singing gaily?
Chirped and sang, oh so merrily, while I fed you
That one leftover dried chilli?
What has happened now?
Wish you could speak to me, even if for a row.
The longing to hear you warble...
Why don’t you?
Your home is now made of gold and classic Roman marble.
Just to find a home now,
You don’t need to fly miles and miles
Which, by the way, you made out of withering leaves and stone piles.
I bring to you the best treats
While you hang restful on this high rise retreat
So close to your favourite rumbling sky.
“The answer to your questions, my innocent dear,”
Said a soothing voice from afar.
No matter which creature
Each a hopeful dreamer, mind you.
Ultimately desires to be its own seeker.
Only then any being evolves
And chirpily, happily absolves.
Even if the captors gift them the moon
And twinkling stars,
We do tend to forget,
Birds just aren’t meant to be ensnared.
- Saee Shirolkar
About the writer:
Ms Saee Shirolkar is a fellow bibliophile with a passion for studying and teaching literature. Her flair for writing emerges when she muse on the beauty of daily life. Through her writing, she seeks new journeys and hope they lead her to beautiful destinations.

Lovely poem Saee, it truly captures the stong urge to be free. Keep writing
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